The Watchers. A story in progress

If you would jump over to my regular blog and scroll back to December 19th, 2008, you will find the beginning of a story that I ran parts of for six or so entries.
"The Watchers" is an alternative world Science Fiction/fantasy involving a troubled girl and a nosy holy man, both being used by hidden beings called the watchers.
If you read it, tell me what you think. Should I continue? Do you want to read more?