Messing Up Your Characters

Once, at a writers’ meeting, a fellow writer said he was quitting the group. His explanation? He’d had a happy childhood. We all understood. Some of the best writers out there grew up in unhappy homes. Not all, but a lot. Those unhappy childhoods gave them both content and incentive to write great stories.


I had a happy, normal, well-adjusted childhood. As a beginning writer, I started out writing what I knew about and that was happy, well-adjusted … and boring.


I realized I’d have to learn how to create characters that don’t put my readers to sleep or go to work at Walmart. I did so by creating characters who have difficulty with adversity because, like me, they’ve never known it and so, don’t know how to deal with it when it hits them over the head. It worked and I started selling.


I still struggle with the process.


As a writer, you must do whatever works for you to create great characters. You can throw problems you are familiar with at them or you can throw problems at them that you … and they … know nothing about. Doesn’t matter which as long as they end up with problems they can’t handle.


Your characters will grow, your story will be better and, most of all, your characters will be more interesting.



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Published on June 22, 2013 07:10
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message 1: by Lilo (new)

Lilo Hi, Florence,
If you need adversity, how about I sell you my mother-in-law? Correction: I'll give her to you for free. -- I'm just kidding. I can't give her to you as we broke off with her a long time ago. Was just too much adversity. I'd rather write boring books.


message 2: by Florence (new)

Florence Witkop I know how you feel. I'd rather write boring books too because I don't like adversity.


message 3: by Lilo (new)

Lilo You are lucky you had a happy childhood. Mine wasn't all that great, and not only because of Hitler. However, I didn't know any different; therefore, I wasn't pitying myself. I am quite a strong and resilient personality, so I did o.k. while the same circumstances might have made a more vulnerable child sick. My staple was my biological grandmother, called Tati (who was the sister of my adoptive grandmother). Part of the reason for writing my early-childhood memoir was to set her a monument.


message 4: by Florence (new)

Florence Witkop I hope to read that memoir some day.


message 5: by Lilo (new)

Lilo Hi, Florence,
Thank you for your interest in my book. Would you be interested in an ARC? I hope that ARCs will be available by end of July. I wish I wasn't such a computer-dummy. Most of this publishing/marketing is Chinese for me. -- I haven't given your books much attention yet, simply for the fact that I have so many must-reads (non-fiction publishing/marketing)and should-reads (anything related to the Third Reich and WWII), plus books I promised to read and review when I first joined Goodreads, so that it will be a while before I can read anything that's not on my first priority list. I think I am spending too much time on the Goodreads website. It's my first time on a social medium, and I have yet to find my balance.


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