All forms of language are actually dialects, with a language being considered an official language when it has taken on some power. It takes on power by its users taking on power. It dies when its users die, etc.
Having a dystopian world, or any kind of world really, each group of characters should realistically speak in a pattern. It does not have to be a major change, but there needs to be a distinction.
The question is, write it as it's said which can be annoying to some readers, or simply 'mention' that an accent is in use. Of course, the register will help identify a dialect. i.e. saying 'it's such a bother' compared to 'what a pain in the ass'. Same meaning, different words.
So how important is a dialect to a world, and do readers favor it or hate it? And should it be used, to what extent?
Published on June 08, 2013 18:48
That being said, dialects should be handled with care. Anyone who's read Huckleberry Finn knows that staying too true to a dialect can make for some tricky reading!