Querying! Help?? *Cookies*

So, just for the heck of it, I’m practising queries. Actually, also because I’ve dug out Sanctuary again and am plodding onwards with edits. I’m nearly done with Draft 2, and I’m rather hopefully that it will only need up to a Draft 4 before it’s DONE-done. Hopefully. :S Anyway, in the spirit of procrastination that always attacks me at this ridiculously busy time of term, a query. Feel free to shred; I have t-rex-tough skin when it comes to this ;)

Moving halfway across Australia to Nowra, ca...