I DID IT!!!

It took a lot more work than I expected. I kept running into parts I thought I'd already fixed, plot holes I forgot I hadn't figured a solution for, and then plain old things like inconsistencies and the like.
But I did it. And with 1 hour, 58 minutes to spare. (But who's counting, right? :-D)
The murder mystery I've tentatively titled Trigger Point is officially submitted to Covenant!
This means that one commenter from THIS POST gets to celebrate with chocolate, and that person, according to...