To Ocean’s End: An Excerpt Read Aloud

Okay, here is my first ever attempt at reading something aloud for the public to enjoy. This is from my soon-to-be published fantasy novel To Ocean’s End. It’s the story of a seafaring captain who can never find a moment to eat a cheeseburger in peace. Please note: the last two minutes are just outtakes of me flubbing up my words and making all sorts of faces. Enjoy!

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Any and all constructive critique is welcome. I do know I still need to work on reading slower. Also, if anyone wants to read a chapter aloud, lemme know. I hope to get as many people involved as possible.