Kickstarter project for “Solitude:Disillusionment” draft feedback wanted!

I finished putting all of the information in for the Kickstarter program, and I am wondering what you think of it. Can you maybe take a look at the page, and the proposal, and the video and tell me what you think of it?

Here is the link!

http://www.kickstarter.com/projects/887283131/2143153594?token=75eeb256