Finding Story Balance in Dead Game with New Character Jordan Smith

I consistently receive comments about the supporting character of Jordan Smith in my latest novel " Dead Game ". I hear questions like… What's up with this Jordan character? Is he based on someone you know? What made you create this particular character to go up against strong, confident Emily Stone?

As I was outlining " Dead Game ", I realized that there was just something missing in the story. I had an ultra creepy serial killer hunting his unsuspecting victims by an interactive computer game. E...