Making Connections

How do you get the reader to connect to your work? You make them feel involved. Sure, right, but how? One thing they must do is be involved in the story and one way you can get them involved is by not with-holding what is going on in the character. The character is constantly being affected by what is happening in each scene. He's changing. OR he should be. If he's not maybe something is wrong in your scene.

All these changes can be small ones that occur when he encounters something, well, s...