Editing away......

Currently I am working more on my story, and I had to get rid of a chapter so here it is:
Chapter 1
People say that words
have no power, and they cannot hurt you. They lie. Words can cut you up, and
make you wish you were dead. They have the power to hurt you to the point where
it is like a kick to the gut, or a shot to the heart when they end
relationships with people that thought they cared about them. Words have the
power to embarrass you to the point where people call you names everywhere you
walk like they did me. Saying I had slept around when that is not the case.
It can make people talk
about you, so bad that you can feel so miserable you think about suicide. Or
you have to switch schools so the people don’t know you, and wont know the
nickname they call you. Like a nightmare the emotional scars can keep you up at
night. Words can be bad enough to turn people against you, and make you have no
friends. The people who do this have a name:Bullies!
It is not just words
they use to hurt people. Sometimes they use physical abuse. Boyfriends hurt
girlfriends and use physical violence to make their girlfriends obey them like
mine tried to. Pushing you, and even spreading rumors to trash your reputation.
I went through hell in
elementary, middle, and high school because of them. I have at least five of
them do the worst they could to me. It did not turn me suicidal though it
turned me homicidal. I want them dead with their heads on a platter.
All the things they put
me through are nothing compared to the hell I am going to cause them. Luckily
for me the bullies grew up, and did more horrible things then gossiping like
immature childish teenagers…
They grew up and landed
with criminal charges such as killing, raping, abusing animals, child
molesting, and torturing. And all these activities they did made them all targets
of The Killer Contract Agency.
The Killer Contract
agency is the agency i work for that allows me to get my revenge. The only way
to get in it or become an operative is to be bullied, and that is how I started
working for them. That is how I became the famous Scarlet Nightshade.
It would have been longer, but I thought of a better first chapter which will be in the story since it gives the novel more of a punch.
Until next time,
Wolfdreamer25

Published on April 25, 2013 08:09
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