I think the text-patch will read…

Now it reads: Artur’s face, narrow-nosed and with a chipped front tooth — Irene’s, dark as an ateva, but brown, and eyes darker than her face, scarily dark, full of thoughts –

If I make it apply Bjorn, who was in the original 3, it can become—Artur’s face, narrow-nosed and with a chipped front tooth — Irene’s, pale as nand’ Bren’s; and Bjorn, dark as an ateva, but brown, and eyes darker than his face, scarily dark, always full of thoughts –

I like the description, but Irene’s become otherwise, and Bjorn still has to be defined…