Cover question, Part 2

So last week I posed a question about the working cover for “Lonely Phoenix,” the story I hope to publish in the next few days. After reading through the comments and what was, and wasn’t, said, I’ve made a few changes. This is the new version of the cover.

Not only would I like your thoughts on it, but also your thoughts on my working description of the story.

Partway to a new colony world, board member Geoffrey Ames is woken from hibernation by the caretaking crew of the Lucian. They require...