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The author of Flight of Faith (Face-Lift 528) has a new version she'd like you to look at. I'm placing it below, as the old comment trail is lengthy, and some of you may not wish to scroll through it.


Orphan Lia Falwin is through battling demons (at least her personal ones). She’s managed to cultivate a quiet life as caretaker for a secluded Takadian manor, complete with surrogate family, good friends, and strong faith. Lia wants things to stay just as they are. When she receives an unsigned lett