2 Nisan: Retelling (Pesach Sestina for #blogExodus)


The story's always ours to tell:

how Moses demanded that Pharaoh free

the Hebrews. We'd forgotten how to ask

for open air, for rest, for the taste

of all the possibilities of spring.

So God ordered: let My people go.



Pharaoh said: who exactly intends to go?

Maybe the men, sure, but don't tell

me you intend to try to spring

the women and children free.

Moses stammered. He knew the taste

of words locked tight, unable to ask.



This time the words were God's own task.

We know how the narrative will go:

Nile turned to blood, the taste

of locusts, darkness too thick to tell

one hand from the next. We made free

with lamb's blood on the lintels that spring



and Pharaoh relented. We got to spring

through the parted waters of the sea. We didn't ask

what it would mean to be set free.

All our leaders said was, it was time to go.

Bring your children on your back, tell

the women to bake in haste. Taste



and see that God is good! Now the taste

of that flatbread hyperlinks us with spring.

The full moon of Nisan, when we tell

our tale, when our children ask

why, on this night, do we all go

to seder? We recline, free



to take our time, to learn, to eat, free

to savor matzah and maror, the taste

of liberation in our mouths. I yearn to go

and sing all night until the sun springs

over the horizon and the sages ask

if it's time for the morning shema. Tell



me: what's it like to be free in spring?

Taste the sweetness of being able to ask.

Go and sit down. We've a story to tell.




BlogExodusFor my second contribution to blogExodus, I wrote a sestina. (If you dig sestinas, you might enjoy browsing the new sestina category here, which will bring you to all of the sestinas I've posted here over the years.)


Today's theme is retelling, which is pretty much what Passover's about. In a certain way this retelling is central to Judaism all year round: we remember the Exodus daily (in our liturgy), weekly (in the Shabbat kiddush), and of course at Passover-time.


I enjoyed this chance to do some retelling in a new form.


For other people's contributions to these two weeks of Nisan pre-Pesach-blogging, keep an eye on the #blogExodus hashtag. Enjoy!

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