Is Three Really A Crowd?

Earlier, I published the opening lines to a story I have started writing to try and guage the response. It received none so I have removed it to rewrite it. Perhaps I don't have the right aptitude for erotica or perhaps a bloke writing from a female POV doesn't work well.

Perhaps it was too graphic; perhaps suggestion and innuendo are more satisfying to read than detailed description. I suppose if you're reading something that is intended to stimulate, you only want a hint, an idea of how the experience would feel, rather than an expose of how somebody else wants to do it.

More research then? Well, there are worse things to study.