Badly Incompetent Baddies

This is rather a shame, since a good villain can often be the driving force behind a story. Their role is to push the heroes outside of their comfort zone. If the story is going to be at all suspenseful, the heroes have to be in real danger, and the Evil Overlord has to have a high probability of winning, right up until the last moment. The best, scariest bad guys are pragmatic and highly competent.
Now although I'm talking about stories which fall loosely into the adventure genre (fantasy, action, etc), but this concept also applies to other story types-- this could be the romantic rival who falls glaringly short of the hero (or is just a bad match for the love interest), the coach who would rather compromise team performance than let the hero play, and so on.
The key is to trust your heroes to come through via their own ingenuity and strength, rather than insuring their success by artificially undermining the villain. The accomplishments of the hero will be much more exciting and impressive when they're pitted against someone who's a genuine threat.
Published on January 11, 2013 02:28
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