Feedback Request

The author of Face-Lift 210, which, for you nostalgia buffs, appeared way back in 2006, has a new title and a couple new versions, and would like to know which one you like better. I'm posting them here because the comment trail for the old versions was long and would require a lot of scrolling. So comment here.

Short query (185 words)

Dear Evil,

Pressured by an obsessed cop to refute the post mortem findings on the Salt Lake City district attorney, ER physician Dragan Sakic draws the wrath of a ki