redplasticglass asked: So you're reading a story and it's...

redplasticglass asked: So you're reading a story and it's trotting along great - what irritating thing, either content or style (or both), will throw you out of the story and either ruin things for you or just makes it really difficult to immerse yourself again?

There's a lot of things, actually. In fantasy (unless it's comedic fantasy) anachronisms will really throw me off. People who are at the swords and spears level who tell each other, "I'll meet you in fifteen minutes." Basically anythin