My Review of: Myth Weaver

I was given this book in exchange for an honest review. I would just like to say that this is only my honest opinion and that's it. Some people have different views and that is fine too.

 

First of all. The things that I liked. I thought the cover was really well done. It looks cool. Second, I did like the fact that the MC was actually put into the myths. I liked that he actually saw through Achilles's eyes. That he was Loki. Ecetera. That was about it.

 

Things that I didn't like. I thought that the writing style was hard to follow. There were a lot of errors and typos that I found myself stumbling over a lot. The MC wasn't very convincing (or any other character for that matter). The dialogue needs a lot of work and I would suggest that the author seek out a good proofreader. I think that there should be more definition of the "realwhirl " and the MC's imagined worlds. Sometimes it was really hard to differintiate between the two. I would've liked to see the two different plots (judging the gods contest and the "realwhirl" plot) meshed together better. It was a little confusing at times.

 

I liked the idea better and I think it has potential after some proofreading and re-edits.

Stars: Two out of Five