First Page Critiques :)

I've had several people ask me lately for critiques of their first pages ... which I really enjoy doing, but if I can share those critiques with other writers, it helps even more than the one ...

Now, I'd like to offer the service to all of my readers! Call it a Christmas gift, that I'll keep giving all year round.

The critiques are FREE if I can post the finished critique on my blog. Reading critiques helps both the writer and others who are striving to fine-tune their own writing.

If you'd prefer a private first page critique, I can do that for only $25, payable by credit card via Paypal.

I look forward to seeing your first pages and giving you the feedback to help make them their best. :)

Email your first page to RyanHunter.45@gmail.com and specify if you'd like a public or private critique. 
Credentials: Ryan Hunter has worked for two newspapers as managing editor, copy editor and features writer. She has worked as a magazine editor, freelancer and is the author of four published novels. She works closely with a New Times Bestselling Author doing proofing, editing and formatting. 
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