More from the work in progress

A nugget from Chapter 6 of my novel-in-progress:

Joe Eddie didn’t have a liquor license so he didn’t actually sell beer. He gave the beer away. What he did sell was the container.


I’m congratulating myself because I discovered I had changed one character’s job title midway. Glad I fixed that error before it found its way into print!
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Published on October 18, 2012 13:37
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