Thoughts on Flashbacks

Merriam-Webster's Dictionary defines flashback as “an interruption of the chronological sequence (as of a film or literary work) of an event of earlier occurrence”.



In general, flashback allows the writer to share backstory.  This can be done through memory or recollection, a diary or journal, dreams, or even whole scenes.  While flashback is a commonly used device, it must be employed carefully.  Too much flashback can stall the flow of forward action, which is necessary to keep readers interested.  



I recently read an article by Pearl Luke that was particularly helpful.  In this she lists both techniques and guidelines for effectively using flashbacks.  You can read more about her advice here.



She addressed one technique I personally struggled with as a new writer.  My writing is always in past tense.  Avalin knew she had no choice.  If there was a chance her parents were alive, she had to go.  So when using flashback, I had to switch to perfect past tense.  She had been only fifteen when they received the word her parents had perished in a plane crash.  But if my flashback took more than a sentence or two, this tense became very cumbersome.  Ms. Luke suggests when employing flashback, use perfect past tense at the very beginning of the recollection, then switch back to past tense.  



What's your opinion?  Do you appreciate flashbacks within the context of a story, or do you feel they slow down the action and make it sluggish?



Happy writing,

Karina Harris

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