ROADKILL excerpt Part One

Here we go. A few days earlier than planned, but that's a good thing. Here is the excerpt...now it is *not* copy edited (as I can't find that version and no doubt couldn't figure out how to strip all the editor bubbles off of it), so no bitching about punctuation and grammar (usually the grammar is incorrect on purpose...a Cal train of thought knows nothing of conjunction-conjunction-what's your function.) 

Now, Poynt's review for the movie New Moon said that someone was "left holding...