Someone is seriously going to have to help me with this title. I
can't decide whether "Chaied" (which isn't a word, except it is now,
because I'm using it) should be hyphenated at the end, or all together
like a proper verb (?).
Chai-ed or Chaied, people?! It's driving me nuts!
Aside from that little detail...
Apparently Will has decided to bow out of the serial killer role.
Dude. He was supposed to be *it*! I even created a lovely little coffee
shop with a cute name (The Trusty Mug - hello!), and a back room and
basement large enough for him to do what he needed to do without any
issues.
And he decides to chuck it all for a quick bout of kinky bondage on
the back table, while Anna gets kidnapped by some guy I don't know who
works in a kiosk.
A *kiosk*, for crying out loud.
I swear, I'm going to stop picking my villains ahead of time. They
never frickin' cooperate, and then I'm left with a bigger mess than I
planned.
*sigh*
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