Open Mic! And Jennifer Brown!

It's time for another Open Mic, and this week, I have a surprise for youuuuu!

But first the details;

Same rules as always; 300-words or less of your original poem, short story, or novel excerpt. Comment at least one other piece if you post on yourself.

As usual, I will read and (try to) comment the pieces myself, giving you one piece of constructive advice should you ask for it (and truly want it).

This Open Mic is open for entries today through Sunday, after which I suggest you wait to post...