feverishly, So Say the Waiters

I've written over 100 pages in eight days. Granted, these book have a lot of dialogue, but that's a record for me. If these books weren't so cerebral, they'd be straight up screen plays, but I do want to keep them as literature-like as possible. There's no way to call them literary. They're just too mainstream.
So yeah, the character development is kind of taking itself over. One of the main characters surprised me when I rewrote a scene to make her so much more compli...