Is This an Improvement?

Alright, I've changed the strip.  I think I like it better now. As some of the comments noted, I think the "explosive" element and car element in the prior version were too distracting (Makes you momentarily search for a physical connection between the pogo stick and the event).  Now the joke is simpler, and perhaps more relatable.

Here is the new version (Click to enlarge):

So what do you think?

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