Version the Second

Right, here’s an alternate version of the Brig of War cover.
The main objections to Version the First were the green and orange type— the orange in particular, I’m guessing— and the various highlights and shadows I added to the typeface.
The green and orange were the same shades used in the art— I was hoping to harmonize the colors. I hoped the orange would reflect the gunfire and pick up the reddish tinge of the clouds.
The highlights and shadows were necessary to make the type visible, particu...