Mistakes

I'm going through my proof word by word, reading bits aloud. I've noticed several mistakes that didn't get noticed by myself and 2 editors. Some of them are merely continuity issues that anal retentive people like myself would have a fit over and some are just little things that don't make sense. I've started cutting out tiny little bits here and there, just to make it tighter as well. Hopefully it will be as perfect as it's ever going to be soon (yes, I've said that before but this time I mean it)