ADLS Part Two Excerpt

Hi, Remember Me? Falling Off the Edge Of The Earth

ADLS Part Two Excerpt

Still working on the cover.

Not often am I really in love with a reunion or just a few paragraphs in general.

When I wrote this I was like “I really love this”, I would like some opinions. Even if you don’t know the story, just read the excerpt and tell me what you think. This is a rough draft, so I welcome all critiques.

Here goes nothing…

As Alex walked down the long corridor to her bedroom—Liam’s prison—she felt nervous and excited, something she hasn’t felt in such a long time. She knew how he felt, she always had but she wanted to avoid it, she was so scared of him hurting her again. She was worried what she would do to him if he hurt her again. She paused outside the door contemplating if she should keep walking past but she opened the door anyway.

He lied on the floor with his face up to the ceiling, eyes closed, and his arm draped over his forehead. He was a little pale and a little skinny. She knew he was strong enough, but he was not happy. She walked up to the cell quiet as a mouse trying to keep him from knowing she’s there. She just stared at his perfection and even though he was paler and skinnier than she recalled he was still the most beautiful creature she’s ever seen. In all her years and in all her travels she’s never seen a creature that compares to him. She now understands fully why Alice chose him. That was about the only good thing Alice did.

As she stood gripping the cell door like she wanted to rip it off the hinges with a look of lust in her eyes, he opened his and turned his head towards her.

“Piss off I’m not in the mood today.” Liam says getting to his feet.

Alex stood there taking him in not saying a word, she had a wide smile on her lips.

“I mean it, I swear to god if you make me see her anymore…”

Alex opened the cell and walked in.

“I’m tired of this I know you’re not her, stop playing with me!”

Alex took his face in her hands and kissed his lips. Liam fought it for a split second then realized that she was the real thing. He wrapped his arms around her as tight as he can and reattached his mouth to hers. She threading her fingers through his soft hair grabbing it as emotion got more intense.

“Oh my god, you’ve come back! I’ve missed you…”

“I know, shh, I know. It’s ok now. You’re free.” Alex says backing away.

Liam grabbed her right back to his hard warm body and kissed her again. She felt everything. She couldn’t even handle the emotions flooding back into her, she felt as if she may lose consciousness. She hasn’t done that since the first time Liam ever kissed her when she was still human. She lured him out of the cage towards the bed and he lifted her off the ground and she wrapped her legs around his bare waist. He kissed her like he hadn’t had a meal in years he had pure hunger in his eyes. She jumped down from his waste and she turned her back to him. He zipped open her dress and it fell to her ankles he ran his hand down her spine planting wet kisses on the way. She turned back towards him and he fell to his knees weeping.

“Don’t cry my love, I am yours.” She whispered.

Liam laid her onto the bed still on his knees. He gave her a deep kiss between her thighs nipping a vain and smiling as he heard her moan in pleasure. He missed the warmth of her body, the sexy soft moans she couldn’t stop from leaving her lips…the smell of her passion. He took her like an animal ripe from the hunt, he didn’t hold back, it was almost as if he wanted to punish her for letting him go but he would never hurt her, only if she asked nicely. For the first time in over two centuries he felt her climax underneath him and he felt like he was finally back home where he belonged, doing what he was put on this earth to do. Make her happy.