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Emma Sea
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Jul 10, 2012 02:41PM
Just curious: why do you want to write Reversal in the second person? It's so interesting that you're doing this, because it really foregrouds the identification of the reader with the MC. I'd love to read about pushing my mighty veined cock into someone's quivering portal.
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Emma C wrote: "Just curious: why do you want to write Reversal in the second person? It's so interesting that you're doing this, because it really foregrouds the identification of the reader with the MC. I'd love..."Well okay it's not technically true second person, but it comes off a bit like it. Really, the entire book is a long letter from the MC to the guy who broke his heart and left him alone, in debt, in a foreign country. And the MC is basically retelling how they met, how he fell in love with this person, etc, etc, etc, and filling in the blanks of their story that his love interest doesn't know about (along with just general musings about his attractiveness ^_^) ... a lot of 'you this...' 'you that...' 'I did this and you responded with...'
I have no idea how I'm going to handle sex scenes in this style to be honest @_@ I feel like the 'you's would be so jarring they would shatter the fantasy, but I'll probably give it a shot and if I don't like it I'll just make it a fade to black thing ... because might as well make it completely unmarketable *lol* XD
WeaselBox wrote: "I find present tense usually makes me feel like I'm watching a movie by proxy, as if someone else were in the theater describing what's happening to me over the phone. "lol, yes.
Emma C wrote: "Ah, so more an epistolary novel! Cool!"I suppose, but I always think of epistolary as multiple documents rather than one really long one ^_^
WeaselBox wrote: "Epistolary is okay, second person is vomit. Hell, I'd avoid first person if it weren't for the fact I like detective novels and a few of my favorite writers do it very well. I don't think I could..."
....I just finished watching an episode of the very old Sherlock Holmes TV show and somehow imagined this entire reply in Jeremy Brett's voice *lol*
But otherwise, I wouldn't write off entire styles as universally "vomit". It's just there's rarely any need to write a novel in second person. It doesn't usually bring anything to the table that a more traditional narrative style couldn't. But try playing a CYOA without second person ... it's no where near as fun :D
In this case, the MC of Reversal discovers he has the ability to rewind time. The second-person-ish elements are really about filling in the blanks. He perceives it all as one long chain, but in actuality his lover is unaware of some of the events because they happened on a different timeline.
Isa wrote: "In this case, the MC of Reversal discovers he has the ability to rewind time. The second-person-ish elements are really about filling in the blanks. He perceives it all as one long chain, but in actuality his lover is unaware of some of the events because they happened on a different timeline. "Ooooh! Like Dr Who and River Song! Love love!
EDIT: Actually, no, because they're both missing bits as they move through time askew to both each other and the rest of the time line
I don't listen to anything when I review (the only kind of writing I do). And anyway, most of my music are just game themes... =P
Experiment BL626 wrote: "I don't listen to anything when I review (the only kind of writing I do). And anyway, most of my music are just game themes... =P"I can imagine the Legends of Zelda theme being very interesting to write to XD It would always get stuck in my head. Really elegant for eight-bits
I write a tiny bit of non-fiction: journal articles and stuff. For that I like mostly ambient electronica: Solar Fields, Hol Bauman, Hybrid (complete faves), she, and movie soundstracks by Tomandandy.
Isa wrote: "Experiment BL626 wrote: "I don't listen to anything when I review (the only kind of writing I do). And anyway, most of my music are just game themes... =P"I can imagine the Legends of Zelda theme..."
It's all Final Fantasy for me.
Confession: I dance to the battle themes... if you define dancing to be moving awkwardly and embarrassing oneself.
Emma C wrote: "I write a tiny bit of non-fiction: journal articles and stuff. For that I like mostly ambient electronica: Solar Fields, Hol Bauman, Hybrid (complete faves), she, and movie soundstracks by Tomanda..."Movie soundstracks? Hmm. Interesting. I got music trailer themes. =D
Isa, how much am I digging the demo of Red Mist you linked to! I have the album version from Divided and never really cared for it before.
I know! I don't know why the chose to slow it down for the professional version :/ It lost so much of its bite.
Updated the list with The Condor:The Condor
Why is BDSM always so angsty and depressing? D: Is there anything sillier than a guy in black leather futzing around with medieval dungeon equipment? No, I think not. For this semi-sweet, semi-sarcastic kinky sex romp I use a lot of glam-rock-inspired indie favorites like OK Go's WTF? and Jet's aptly titled Put Your Money Where Your Mouth Is (Spotify)


