Revisions – the hell and the heaven.

So here I am, knee deep in edits for Love Is My Sin. I'm in heaven and hell at the same time.

The hell is going through the story ( again) and wondering why I thought it was a good idea to sub this. I think there's a whole one page with no red on it. Obviously I'm crap, right? I can't seem to get over my obsession with typing colloquially ( using that instead of who is my biggest problem by the looks of it). A couple of scenes I seem to have lost concentration and passived the whassname out...