Why one should never critique while drunk

This critique I received was actually by a good friend of mine. This is purely a joke. I hope you laugh as much as I did at some of her comments. I won't post her name, but if she wants to take credit for this awesomely funny crit, then she can post her name and take the glory.


Love's ProphecyChapter 1




Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada


: Where the hell is the indentation for the paragraph?