The Entangled: Bigger, Badder, and Way More Book-Two-er
Somewhere between draft two and draft three, a strange thing happened.
I set The Invisible People and The Entangled side by side on my desk… and realized Book 2 looks like it could bench-press Book 1.
That slightly terrifying brick you see in the photos? That’s the first full proof of The Entangled—the “bigger, badder, and book-two-er” continuation of Ava’s story. I’m currently deep in Round 3 of edits: tightening sentences, sharpening character arcs, and sweeping up all the narrative glass I broke while smashing reality… again.
A Quick Look Back at Book One
If you’re new here, The Invisible People is my strange little “what if reality could be edited?” novel that somehow wandered out into the world and started getting noticed.
BookLife by Publishers WeeklyJeremiah Moon called it an “alarmed and humane science-fiction debut” that “tackles pressing issues of memory, trauma, and truth in an age when even reality itself can be manipulated.”
That’s still the beating heart of this series: memory, identity, and what happens when the people in power can hit delete.
What to Expect From Book Two
No spoilers, but here’s what I can safely say without Equinox redacting this post:
The world gets wider and weirder. The cracks you glimpsed in Book 1? We’re walking straight into them.
You’ll spend more time inside the minds of characters you only glimpsed before.
The moral lines blur. The question isn’t just “What’s real?” anymore, but “What are you willing to erase to survive?”
If Book 1 asked, “What would it mean to relinquish our painful memories and traumas?” (as BookLife so kindly highlighted),
Book 2 asks, “What happens when someone else decides which version of you is allowed to exist?”
Echo Readers: I Need You Again
I’m planning to open ARCs—and a small batch of physical copies—for my Echo Readers before Christmas (timeline gods, be kind).
If you’re new to the term, an Echo Reader is my name for those of you who:
Read early
Leave honest reviews
Talk about the book in your corners of the internet
And let the story echo outward into other minds
Your reviews and word-of-mouth are the reason The Invisible People found readers who message me things like, “I stayed up until 3 a.m. and now I question everything, thanks.” That’s the good stuff.
How to Get Involved
If you’d like a chance to be an Echo Reader for The Entangled:
Add The Entangled to your Goodreads shelves (TBR, sci-fi, psychological thriller—stack it wherever it fits).
Make sure you’ve read The Invisible People first—Book 2 does not hold your hand with a recap.
Drop a comment on this blog post letting me know you’re interested, and I’ll share details as we get closer.
I can’t promise I’ll have a physical copy for everyone, but I’ll do my best to spread them across timelines.
Thank You
Seeing these two books side by side is surreal. Not that long ago, The Invisible People was just a wild note on my phone. Now Book 2 is thick enough to stop a small-caliber bullet and I’m arguing with my characters about who gets more page time.
Thank you for reading, reviewing, recommending, and generally fueling this universe with your time and attention. Every rating, every review, every message—those are the echoes that keep this world alive.
More updates soon. For now, I’m diving back into the edits before Equinox notices how much I’ve revealed.
Stay strange,
Jeremiah Moon
I set The Invisible People and The Entangled side by side on my desk… and realized Book 2 looks like it could bench-press Book 1.
That slightly terrifying brick you see in the photos? That’s the first full proof of The Entangled—the “bigger, badder, and book-two-er” continuation of Ava’s story. I’m currently deep in Round 3 of edits: tightening sentences, sharpening character arcs, and sweeping up all the narrative glass I broke while smashing reality… again.
A Quick Look Back at Book One
If you’re new here, The Invisible People is my strange little “what if reality could be edited?” novel that somehow wandered out into the world and started getting noticed.
BookLife by Publishers WeeklyJeremiah Moon called it an “alarmed and humane science-fiction debut” that “tackles pressing issues of memory, trauma, and truth in an age when even reality itself can be manipulated.”
That’s still the beating heart of this series: memory, identity, and what happens when the people in power can hit delete.
What to Expect From Book Two
No spoilers, but here’s what I can safely say without Equinox redacting this post:
The world gets wider and weirder. The cracks you glimpsed in Book 1? We’re walking straight into them.
You’ll spend more time inside the minds of characters you only glimpsed before.
The moral lines blur. The question isn’t just “What’s real?” anymore, but “What are you willing to erase to survive?”
If Book 1 asked, “What would it mean to relinquish our painful memories and traumas?” (as BookLife so kindly highlighted),
Book 2 asks, “What happens when someone else decides which version of you is allowed to exist?”
Echo Readers: I Need You Again
I’m planning to open ARCs—and a small batch of physical copies—for my Echo Readers before Christmas (timeline gods, be kind).
If you’re new to the term, an Echo Reader is my name for those of you who:
Read early
Leave honest reviews
Talk about the book in your corners of the internet
And let the story echo outward into other minds
Your reviews and word-of-mouth are the reason The Invisible People found readers who message me things like, “I stayed up until 3 a.m. and now I question everything, thanks.” That’s the good stuff.
How to Get Involved
If you’d like a chance to be an Echo Reader for The Entangled:
Add The Entangled to your Goodreads shelves (TBR, sci-fi, psychological thriller—stack it wherever it fits).
Make sure you’ve read The Invisible People first—Book 2 does not hold your hand with a recap.
Drop a comment on this blog post letting me know you’re interested, and I’ll share details as we get closer.
I can’t promise I’ll have a physical copy for everyone, but I’ll do my best to spread them across timelines.
Thank You
Seeing these two books side by side is surreal. Not that long ago, The Invisible People was just a wild note on my phone. Now Book 2 is thick enough to stop a small-caliber bullet and I’m arguing with my characters about who gets more page time.
Thank you for reading, reviewing, recommending, and generally fueling this universe with your time and attention. Every rating, every review, every message—those are the echoes that keep this world alive.
More updates soon. For now, I’m diving back into the edits before Equinox notices how much I’ve revealed.
Stay strange,
Jeremiah Moon
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