Pointing at the Sun

Lowprice Head gets into his car and takes a drive down to the local supermarket. It is a pleasant drive. Not a day for revelation but a nice day nonetheless. The sky is blue and clear. Not a cloud in it. He sings, “I wear high pants,” to himself and realizes how much he sounds like his father. This irritates him because he does not like his father. He tells himself the rest of the day will be better once he has stocked up on assorted fruits and vegetables.

Suddenly, he is struck with the overwhelming urge to stop the car, get out, and point at the sun for a few minutes. So he does that. And as he stands at the gravel shoulder of the road a black truck pulls up behind his car and a group of three teenagers gets out. They all have a lot of tattoos and wear extremely short running shorts.

The most well-muscled of the three approaches Lowprice and gives him a little shove. Lowprice continues to point at the sun.

“You wanna start some shit?” the muscled guy says.

“No,” Lowprice begins. “I’m perfectly content just pointing at the sun for a few minutes or so.”

“That’s some fucked up shit,” the guy says. “You better stop that.”

“I can’t,” Lowprice says.

The muscled guy tries to force Lowprice’s arm down but it stays, ironlike, pointing at the sun. The heavily muscled youth’s friends begin laughing at his failed attempt to bring Lowprice’s frail arm down.

“If you don’t put that arm down I’m gonna fuck you up real good.”

His friends collectively make a sound like, “Whoo!”

“Sorry,” Lowprice says, continuing to point.

“You asked for it, you little shit.”

He walks around to the front of Lowprice and punches him in the face. Several of Lowprice’s teeth shatter and he collapses back onto the gravel, his arm continuing to point toward the sun.

“All right now,” the muscled guy says to his friends. “I’m gonna roll him over here and when I do that I want one of you to get in the truck and drive over his arm.”

“Right on, Mitch,” one of them says.

Mitch rolls Lowprice over and the guy driving the truck runs over it once going forward and again in reverse. Mitch kicks Lowprice over onto his back so his arm rests floppily and broken on his stomach. “Serves you right, you damn pointing shit!” Mitch screams before joining his friends in the truck and speeding away.

Lowprice begins singing, “I need medical attention,” to himself around broken teeth and a busted jaw. Luckily, he no longer sounds like his father when he sings. That makes it an alright day.

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Published on August 21, 2025 21:01
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