10 year old comments

on a novel I've been working on for several years include:
"Too beginningy"
"too all over the place"
"too scientificy"
"pointless:
"too much like a three year old--too many tantrums"
"un-understandable"
"pimple? too off topic"
why? why? why? why?
"too diverse"
"cliche"

and then--
"finally a problem" (about page 60)
"scary"
"Kenna is so sly and evil"
"Happy ending"
"so exciting and informative"
"very deep and intimate"
"a clever plan"
"Yay! A happy ending!"