Smooth Entry

Taos Toolbox is moving along— swimmingly, I must say— and has already featured two critique sessions, a couple of lovely catered meals, and a serious literary discussion in the hot tub.
Some of the moments of critique stood out, and here they are:


Your story gave me a minor epistemological crisis.


If you could write the next 20 chapters this afternoon, I’d like to read them in bed.


Cloud should be something more than a cute furry cat that Sam sleeps with.


Writing about music is like dancing about...