I need help writing a tagline…

I’ve been struggling with concocting a tagline for my upcoming release, In Thy Tender Care. And I could really use your help.

Last night, my sisters were helping my try to concoct some sort of tagline (no, we’re not even talking a blurb yet) for my story, and we came up with a few possibilities.

Which of these is your favorite? Which would most inspire you to read my book?

When an epidemic hits at Christmastime, can a schoolteacher with a grudge and a doctor with a secret still share the light of the season with their small town?When an epidemic hits their small town at Christmastime, can a schoolteacher with a grudge and a doctor with a secret still share God’s light in the darkest of times?When an epidemic hits their small town at Christmastime, can a schoolteacher with a grudge and a doctor with a secret still share the light of the season with those without hope?When an epidemic hits their small town at Christmastime, can a schoolteacher with a grudge and a doctor with a secret still share His light to those in despair?

Please give any help/suggestions in the comments!

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