Five weeks from today

‎"The Sandcastle Girls" arrives only five weeks from today. The following is from Chapter 13.

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Why, she wonders, is she so lonely here – and yet why is she so determined to stay?

She could simply complete the sentence as it is. Drop a small dot after the k in back. She retrieves the pen and dips it into the inkwell, holding the nib perhaps two inches above the paper. In the end, however, she does not add a period. Instead she writes the two words, to me.

She studies the sheer nakedness of the sentence and the meaning in those four brief syllables:

Come back to me.

The words leave her wistful and satisfied at once. When a life is stripped down to tending the starving in the square and the sick in the hospital, why should propriety matter at all? It shouldn’t. Besides: She doubts Armen will ever read a single word she has written tonight.
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Published on June 12, 2012 05:37
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message 1: by Melissa (new)

Melissa Green Hinshaw This came up in an Amazon search today. I got all excited rushed to click "download" and then noticed it said, "Pre-order." I hate waiting!


message 2: by Dan (new)

Dan Radovich Melissa, you will NOT be disappointed with the wait. This is Chris writing with his heart and at his best.


message 3: by Melissa (new)

Melissa Green Hinshaw I haven't been disappointed yet.


message 4: by Kim (new)

Kim Can't wait! Can't Wait!


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