Fains I (A John Chance Mystery) Chapter 4 – What We Do in the Shadows (rewrite 4)

Yes, rewrite #4. And no, I still don’t want to talk about it. Except to offer what’s happening is probably going to end up in An Experiment in Writing about getting the voice correct (which I’ve done before in experiments 15–18), so perhaps not so much about getting the voice correct as letting the characters … Continue reading "Fains I (A John Chance Mystery) Chapter 4 – What We Do in the Shadows (rewrite 4)"