A Sneak Peek at the Sass, Shade, and Suspicion Coming in Book Six
By the time this blog post goes live, Betrayed on the Promenade will be in the capable hands of my editor—and I’ll be breathing into a paper bag while muttering, “It’s fine, it’s all fine.”
After months of simmering drama, suspicious soufflés, and secrets tucked between appetizers, it’s time to serve up something a little sharper: the one-liners. The zingers. The kind of dialogue that makes you raise your eyebrows and whisper, Ooooh, they did NOT just say that.
So, in honor of turning in book six (and surviving another deadline with only minimal sobbing), I’m sharing a sampler platter of some of my favorite lines from the manuscript. These little beauties are pulled straight from the mouths of suspects, schemers, and one pageant queen who's finally had enough.
"You've outlived your usefulness."
It’s amazing how fast warmth turns to ice when someone doesn’t need you anymore. Just ask Zane.
"Beggars can't be choosers" —unless they're choosing who to blackmail.
Some people ask for a handout. Others ask for hush money.
"Toast his swan song."
Every villain wants a standing ovation. Some get a body bag instead.
"Dazzle, distract, and dupe."
Zane Owens didn’t just wear the crown—she weaponized it.
"And now it’s your turn to pay the piper."
Revenge isn’t always loud. Sometimes it sounds like a soft knock on a locked door.
"The die was cast the moment she stepped on board."
Not every passenger is there for the cruise.
"Pick your poison."
A metaphor, sure. But also...maybe not?
"The price for my silence just went up."
Everybody’s got a number. Some just come with decimal points and death threats.
"Once a con, always a con."
Redemption arcs are nice. But let’s be honest—they’re rare.
So there you have it—a teaser trailer made of sharp tongues and sharper twists. No spoilers (I promise!), just a little peek into the tone, tension, and tangled web of Betrayed on the Promenade.
If one of these zingers made you snort, gasp, or nod in agreement, I’d love to hear it. And if you’ve got a favorite one-liner of your own? Send it over—I’m always collecting new material. 😉
Until next time,
Keep your secrets close and your cocktails closer.
MJ Mac
Hi, I’m author MJ Mac, and I want to extend a heartfelt thank you for taking the time to read this month's blog. The Kennedy Reeves Mystery series is a collection of whodunits that have captured the hearts of over 75K readers! Many say it’s the perfect blend of Murder She Wrote meets The Love Boat. With a crafted mix of eccentric characters, plot twists, “ah-ha” moments, cliffhangers, and a cruise director you can’t help but root for, it’s no wonder the series has garnered a devoted following and over 400 four-star reviews.
I appreciate your support and hope you continue to join Kennedy on her thrilling adventures! Stay tuned for more updates, and happy reading!
After months of simmering drama, suspicious soufflés, and secrets tucked between appetizers, it’s time to serve up something a little sharper: the one-liners. The zingers. The kind of dialogue that makes you raise your eyebrows and whisper, Ooooh, they did NOT just say that.
So, in honor of turning in book six (and surviving another deadline with only minimal sobbing), I’m sharing a sampler platter of some of my favorite lines from the manuscript. These little beauties are pulled straight from the mouths of suspects, schemers, and one pageant queen who's finally had enough.
"You've outlived your usefulness."
It’s amazing how fast warmth turns to ice when someone doesn’t need you anymore. Just ask Zane.
"Beggars can't be choosers" —unless they're choosing who to blackmail.
Some people ask for a handout. Others ask for hush money.
"Toast his swan song."
Every villain wants a standing ovation. Some get a body bag instead.
"Dazzle, distract, and dupe."
Zane Owens didn’t just wear the crown—she weaponized it.
"And now it’s your turn to pay the piper."
Revenge isn’t always loud. Sometimes it sounds like a soft knock on a locked door.
"The die was cast the moment she stepped on board."
Not every passenger is there for the cruise.
"Pick your poison."
A metaphor, sure. But also...maybe not?
"The price for my silence just went up."
Everybody’s got a number. Some just come with decimal points and death threats.
"Once a con, always a con."
Redemption arcs are nice. But let’s be honest—they’re rare.
So there you have it—a teaser trailer made of sharp tongues and sharper twists. No spoilers (I promise!), just a little peek into the tone, tension, and tangled web of Betrayed on the Promenade.
If one of these zingers made you snort, gasp, or nod in agreement, I’d love to hear it. And if you’ve got a favorite one-liner of your own? Send it over—I’m always collecting new material. 😉
Until next time,
Keep your secrets close and your cocktails closer.
MJ Mac
Hi, I’m author MJ Mac, and I want to extend a heartfelt thank you for taking the time to read this month's blog. The Kennedy Reeves Mystery series is a collection of whodunits that have captured the hearts of over 75K readers! Many say it’s the perfect blend of Murder She Wrote meets The Love Boat. With a crafted mix of eccentric characters, plot twists, “ah-ha” moments, cliffhangers, and a cruise director you can’t help but root for, it’s no wonder the series has garnered a devoted following and over 400 four-star reviews.
I appreciate your support and hope you continue to join Kennedy on her thrilling adventures! Stay tuned for more updates, and happy reading!
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