Hieronymus Hawkes’ Unified Theory of Fiction

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Where:

Ch = Characters (depth × relatability × arc complexity)

Se = Setting (detail × immersion factor)

Pint = Internal Plot (emotional stakes × character growth)

Pext = External Plot (action × consequence × suspense)

Cf = Conflict (intensity × complexity × resolution satisfaction)

POV = Point of View clarity (consistency × engagement)

Pc = Pacing (balance × momentum)

St = Structure (cohesion × logical progression)

Tm = Theme resonance (universality × insightfulness)

Kf = Coefficient of Fiction (degree of imaginative freedom × suspension of disbelief)

How it works:

Multiply characters by internal plot (emotional story depth) and setting by external plot (immersive action and excitement).Add conflict because conflict always makes stories juicier.Divide by POV, pacing, and structure, because poor execution here weakens the entire formula!Multiply by the resonance of your theme and the crucial “Coefficient of Fiction,” your wildcard for stretching imagination (the higher, the merrier, within reason).

Example Usage:

If your novel has incredibly rich characters and powerful internal arcs, but is hampered by weak pacing or unclear POV, the formula will yield a lower overall “Story” score, reminding writers that the devil’s in the details and execution matters!