An Example of the Experiments, 3 – Fains I

We left off in An Example of the Experiments, 2 – Fains I with the promise of sharing the original Fains I opening and the rewrite making use of multiple storycrafting techniques. First, the original’s first ~900 words Tim screamed. His father kicked off covers and rose quickly. He didn’t bother with robe or slippers … Continue reading "An Example of the Experiments, 3 – Fains I"