An Example of the Experiments, 2 – Fains I

We left off in An Example of the Experiments – Fains I with a rewrite of the first paragraph, which was much better craftwise than the original and still sucked. It was better than the original because of the solid POV, the protagonist’s situation was clearly stated, the setting and tone were much stronger, more … Continue reading "An Example of the Experiments, 2 – Fains I"