the edits have left the building

I've finished DD's edits :)

As with any edits, I've learned new things about my writing. Sometimes they're embarrassing things (coach versus couch), other times they're really cool (when to use ephemeral and when not to). DD's edits taught me:

* when it's okay to use "-" and when to just go ahead and finish the sentence. FSM, ever since I began the edits, I've found myself looking at my WIPs and thinking, "ugh. Don't do that. Finish the sentence."

* "..." is right, ". . ." isn't.

* when she was w...