Iteration, Or, When Things Don’t Work

Had an interesting experience earlier in the year when doing the illustrations for And Then I Shall Transform: there are six short stories, so obviously I did six illustrations… except I ended up doing seven. Why? Because one of the illustrations I did just didn’t work.

Here it is:

Now, it’s not a BAD illustration necessarily, right? BUT it doesn’t read clearly. Not sure if it’s more or less the case online, but certainly in person, it’s hard to focus in on the fact that it’s a human...