Book Review: Eye of the Ouroboros by Megan Bontrager
Title: Eye of the Ouroboros
Author: Megan Bontrager
Release date: April 15th, 2024
*Huge thanks to Quill & Crow Publishing and Netgalley for the digital ARC of this one!*
I’ve always loved seeing the releases Quill & Crow Publishing have, but as of yet, haven’t dipped my toe into what they’ve released. Then, while cruising through Netgalley, I saw this one. The cover immediately had me excited, the title had me intrigued and then the synopsis screamed at me to read it. With this being Megan’s debut, I wasn’t worried, knowing full well that if Quill & Crow were releasing it, it would be a solid tale.
What I liked: Bontrager has delivered an unexpected gem. Not once did I get a sense that this was a debut, the storytelling – both depth and scope – were solid and controlled, which is a testament to what it is that Megan has created here.
The story follows Forest Ranger Theo, short for Theodora, a name she detests. Years ago, her sister Flora disappeared in the woods around the town they live in, so she’s made it her life mission to try and find what happened. Everyone blames Theo for Flora’s disappearance – even her parents, who treat her like she’s a blister that needs to be popped – so Theo gets hired on with the Rangers to be as close to the location as possible.
The woods there are strange. People go missing all the time. And it is Theo who finds them, looking harder and longer than anyone else. But with each person she finds, there’s little things she notices. From missing toes, to strange stories, it all adds up to something odd going on. Even the Forest Ranger handbook alludes to that. Rule #1 is for no Forest Ranger to take any set of stairs they may come across.
Bontrager sets the stage well, so that, when a conspiracy-theory believing character pops up and introduces her to the idea of what ‘is’ happening, at first she things they’re nuts. And then she believes them.
It is from that point on, when we learn of the Federal Bureau of Reality, that the story really shines. Bontrager weaves in an action-fueled quest with different portals, a strange government agency nobody knows about and the truth to what happened to Flora. Tensions remain high until the end and as the story goes on, each character becomes more and more fleshed out. Including Theo’s on again, off again, former lover, the reporter Delilah, who tried to bring more exposure to Flora’s disappearance, but in turn seemed to use it as career leverage.
Everything ramps up, leading to the ending which was cathartic, heartbreaking and completely expected, even if you didn’t want it to be.
What I didn’t like: Some may find the introduction of the ‘FBR’ to be comical. Bontrager keeps it serious and utilizes that narrative to strengthen the story, but if you read the synopsis and smirk when you get to that section, then most likely this book won’t be for you.
Why you should buy this: A solid debut from start to finish, Bontrager accelerates out of the starting blocks and never slows down. Theo is a fantastic lead character – broken, battered, and depending on alcohol – they are a great case of why sometimes an initial unlikable lead can elevate a story when push comes to shove later on.
Bontrager’s debut is fantastic and one I think will make a lot of fans of dark fiction intertwined with fantastical elements very happy.
5/5
