Where am I write now?

I am write, my friends. I am write.

1) I’ve completed my first final draft! ?!?! (See 3 below)

2) I am waiting on my illustrator. One scene in my book is fully illustrated (without text), and I’ve reviewed about 90% of the sketches so far and received about 2/3 of the final ink drawings.*

3) I will be soliciting some feedback (as well as submitting it to a professional proofreader to help catch any typos--it’s so easy to read your own material a hundred times and miss something because what it’s supposed to say is actually more in your head than on paper) and then making revisions as I see fit. After feedback revisions, I will have my second (and hopefully final) final draft. I like to name these drafts because when a process takes six years to complete (as this one has), counting drafts has allowed me to feel like I’ve made some progress. It’s an affirmation. After a few years of writing story material without needing to shape it, I went through eleven drafts to get where I am

I believe it’s important to solicit feedback, especially as a self-published author. I’m quite happy with the book as it is … actually I love it … but I would like to get reactions from a handful of other writers and friends before I start sending out query letters to publishers. I will consider all feedback (What is confusing? What did they love? How did they interpret/misinterpret some parts of it? etc.) and decide what, if anything, I want to change from there. I am comfortable with quite a level of misinterpretation of my themes and visions, but there may be certain things (wait…I didn’t want anyone to think that) that I want to revise. This feedback will be limited but useful as a sounding board.

4) I am waiting for a friend of mine to build a single-page mini-website for me (based on my design) that will function to play a song that I composed with a sound engineer and three musicians. This is the last piece of my book puzzle. There is a scene in my book where several characters play instruments together ... a web address is mentioned indirectly, and if you visit the website, you will hear the music that the characters are performing.

5) After completing the next draft, and adding the illustrations and posting the song, I will write query letters to publishers and literary agent and pursue the self-publishing process simultaneously. Onward, ho! (And stop calling me a ho.)

* I essentially worked with the illustrator as a writer of a comic book might: I wrote a description of every image in detail and even took photographs of friends posing in every position I wanted represented. Then I worked with the illustrator for about a month to get the character sketches to a place that captured my vision. She has sent me pencil sketches of each frame, and I commented on them before she did the final ink drawers. They have actually come out quite beautifully!
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Published on December 06, 2009 22:09 Tags: author, novel, process, publishing, status, writing
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notgettingenough David, More than happy to be a proofreader.


message 2: by David (new)

David Katzman Thank you, NGE and Isabella. NGE, i might take you up on that!


message 3: by Jen (new)

Jen You finished Proust and a book of your own? Overacheiver. Talented Proust lover. Wait. That doesn't sound right.

But congratulations anyway.


message 4: by David (new)

David Katzman LTM. Thanks again, Jen. :-)


message 5: by Jen (new)

Jen I had to look up LTM just now. Proust should have used textspeak; it would have saved quite a few pages. IMHO.


message 6: by David (new)

David Katzman I invented LTM! Is it listed somewhere? I've been trying to get people to use it because i think it's usually more honest than LOL. ...LTM

I've been hoping to see it picked up so then i could believe i started a random meme.

I think you should write a textspeak adaptation of Proust. That would fucking rock, and you could tweet it. Every tweet would cover a page of Proust. Say...did you ever write that review?


message 7: by Jen (new)

Jen I haven't finished the bastard. I have only a bit left, but every time I have a minute or two to devote to reading for pleasure I pick something else. I simply don't have enough energy at the moment to do the Prousty Proust dive into multi-leveled consciousness.

But before too long I will hold my breath and go under, for what I hope will be the last time. I don't like how Proust mouths things to me underwater. He prattles on so much the bubbles coming from his mouth obscure my vision. And the chlorine of his prose stings my eyes.


message 8: by David (new)

David Katzman very poetic. Proust would be proud.


message 9: by Jen (new)

Jen Page One

OMG!!!I (heart- I don't know how to make one) mom.

Page, well, pick any page thereafter:

OMG! Flowers! Madelines! Table legs! Working women!

LMAO Mme. Verdurin

:( Swann





message 10: by David (new)

David Katzman genius!


message 11: by JSou (new)

JSou Congrats on your final draft! I'm anxious to "experience" it.

I love the Proust textspeak, Jen. Hilarious. You can make a heart by pressing the ALT button and then hitting the "3" on the right side of the keyboard.

I ♥ mom

I had to look up LTM as well.


message 12: by David (new)

David Katzman LTM! Where are you guys finding LTM. Seriously, i invented that about 6 months ago and started using it with people at work via our IM function. They didn't know what it meant, and i had to tell them. But now they are using it!

Thanks, Jessica! I'm glad to see you are enjoying Zamboni so far... :-)


message 13: by JSou (new)

JSou I found it on netlingo.com. It must've caught on. I'll spread the word that credit is yours.

I am loving Zamboni. I read the end of chapter 9 the other day while waiting at the DMV. I was definately LTM. Maybe too loudly though. I'm sure people thought I was crazy.


message 14: by David (new)

David Katzman LTM...

LTM means Laughing to Myself! :-) People throw LOL around so gratuitously that i thought there should be a more honest version. Since you're a lawyer, if you think there might be a copyright infringement, then i'm going to look for someone to sue. Netlingo, you're going down!


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