Attack

Content warning: words and quotations from recent Israel / Gaza news stories.


 


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Attack


 


Phrases that render
us breathless, chest
compressed in an iron vest,
a non-exhaustive list:


charred bodies
music festival
hostage video
death toll


under rubble
collective punishment
blood-spattered
settler-colonialist


"From the river
to the sea"
"I will stab you
and slit your throat"


We are all heart,
raw and beating.
Moral injury
doesn't leave a scar.


 



 


"From the river to the sea." Source.


"I will stab you..." Source


 


A question for my fellow poets, and/or for those who have poetry opinions. Does the use of another color "work" in this poem? Would italics work better? Would it be better not to set those stanzas apart at all? 


And a note to all: if the news or social media are giving you panic attacks, please limit your consumption. This suffering does not help anyone, and it diminishes our capacity to pursue healing and justice wherever we are.


Here's a prompt from the Jewish Studio Project that offers an outlet for emotions and reactions when the news becomes more than we can bear: Art-Making as a Form of Prayer and Nervous System Regulation.

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