"The Courage" and "King of Pine" are out the door.
I did one thing that is a little odd for me. I looked over "The Courage" this morning and realized that it was what I meant it to be, not that it was perfect or anything, but it was what it was supposed to be, but it is the best story I can currently make it. Then I added a little dialog anyway, to explain things more. To me, it doesn't do much but add words, but then, I am really good at not seeing what I have left out of a story that my readers really want to know. I don't think I ruined the story, broke the flow or weighed it down. It still comes in under 3000 words. I kept the original version, just in case, but I think I will probably grow to either like the changes or forget where they begin or end. I have "Hermaion" to look at next, and, in a couple of weeks, "The Golden Stringed Guitar."
Published on April 26, 2012 13:53